Friday, February 29, 2008

2nd

the leader, ralph, tries to keep everything organzied
he uses the conch to keep kids from shouting out
and by having the conch you have the right to speak
being the leader ralph tells everyone there
should be a fire so they all go up on to a hill
and make a fire with piggy's glasses
after a while people start to slack off not doing
what they should be doing
kids start to become wild and not following the rules
one of the kids named jack makes a group called Hunters
to hunt down animals with spears and get meat from them


this is the turning point of the story
which makes the story a lot more interesting

2 comments:

SATISFACTION said...

I like how you explained the situation that Ralph is in i wish we had a chance being trapped on a island with only friends.

MinSuk Nohhh said...

good job on writing the climax
it gave me a clear view of what happened to the kids on the deserted island.